Date - 8th April 2017.
Fimbles florrie flag
It was a lovely sunny day in fimble valley.
Florrie was helping baby pom to build a tower, and fimbo and rockit
Were having races. Just as florrie put the last block on the top of baby pom’s tower,
She heard the tinkling tree tinkling. ‘’I’m getting the fimbling feeling ‘’she cried.
‘’I can feel a twinkling, I can hear a sound, It’s telling me there’s something
Waiting to be found! Where is it? Where is it? What could it be?
I think it might be over there, Let’s go and see!’’ florrie’s find looked like a
Black and white tablecloth stuck to a stick. She waved it in the air. Swoosh! Swoosh!
‘’Oooh, you’ve found a flag!’’ chirped bessis.’’ a special flag! It’s called a chequered flag.
You wave it to finish a race.’’ ‘’ fimbo and rockit love rockit “, said florrie. ‘’I’ll go and wave
My flay them!’’ all the racing they had done, though, had made rockit and fimbo very hungry.
And then all the apples and crumble crackers they had eaten had made them very sleepy…
Zzzzzzzzzzz… ‘’fimbo, rockit, wake up! Look what I’ve found!’’ cried florrie. ‘’A special flag you
Use to finish a race.’’ ‘’fimbo! Gluing! Want to race?’’ said rockit. Zzzzzzzzzzz… ‘’never mind!’’
Said rockit. ‘’I’ll race bessie and roly instead. ‘’We’ll start and finish the race here, by pom’s tower”, said florrie. ‘’I ‘m just going to go and eat an apple to give me lots of energy’’,said rockit ,
Bouncing off. ‘’You start without me. I,m so fast, I’ll easily catch up with bessie and roly!’’
‘’On your marks… get set… go!’’ shouted florrie. But what had happened to rockit? Eating an
Apple had made rockit sleepy all over again. Zzzzzzzz… baby pom and florrie shouting
Woke rockit up. ‘’Glung!’’ he glunged,bouncing off the comfy corner. ‘’Oh no! The race!’’ rockit
Bounced as fast as he could past the bubble fall. He bounced past the play dips. He bounced past the tinkling tree. He bounced as he had never bounced before. At the finish line, florrie was
Holding her flag. Bessie fluttered past. ‘’Bessie’s first’’, she cried. Swoosh! Went the flag. Roly
Rolled past ‘’roly’s second’’, she cried. Swoosh! Rockit bounced in at top speed… ...straigiht into
Baby pom’s tower. Crash! ‘’Rockit’s third!’’ florrrie laughed. Swoosh! ‘’Tickle my tadpoles!
That was fun, even though i didn’t win!’’ said rockit. ‘’ what’s going on?’’ yawned fimbo, ‘’i ‘m ready for more races now. Anyone want to race?’’ ‘’yes!’’ shouted everyone. Swoosh! Went
Florrie’s flay.
I have been practising typing fast. Here is a story I wrote in google docs.
Goldilocks and the three bears
Here are the three bears, daddy bear, mummy bear, and baby bear.
They all go for a walk. Here is goldilockd. No one is home, says goldilocks.
I can go in goldiolcks wants some porridge. Here is daddy bear’s porridge.
It is too salty for goldilocks. This is mummy bear’s porridge. It is too sweet for goldilocks.
Goldilocks likes baby bear’s porridge. And she eats it all up. Goldilcks looks foe a chair.
This is daddy bear’s chair. It is too hard for goldilocks. Here is mummy bear’s chair.
It is too soft for goldilocks. Here is baby bear’s chair. I like this chair, says goldilocks.
Goldilocks sits down. Look. she has broker the chair. I want to go to sleep,says goldilcks.
I can go up here. Daddy bear’s bed is too hard. Mummy bear’s bed is too soft for goldilocks.
Here is baby bear’s bed. I like this bed, says goldilocks. Goldilocks has a sleep. The bears come home they go in. look,says baby bear. The chair is broken. I have no porridge,he says.
The bears go up to look for goldilocks. Up we go, says daddy bear. Look, says baby bear. It is
Goldilocks. Daddy bear says, yes, it is goldilocks. Goldilocks jumps up. You go home, says baby bear. Go home.go home.
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