Hi Kiranjot I liked the way you put pictures which relate to your writing. Next time you could tell us why you celebrate Diwali, and how. By Mehakpreet
Hi Kiranjot, Kiranjot I like the way you described what Diwali is all about. I learnt what Diwali means. Next time you could say when Diwali came like what year and date and month By Armika
Hello Kiranjot i like the way that what you have in Diwali also like food and what does Diwali means next time you should delete the by Kiranjot and Mhoit and Aseem also Kirpal in the down part From: Aayet
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Hi Kiranjot
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you put pictures which relate to your writing.
Next time you could tell us why you celebrate Diwali, and how.
By Mehakpreet
Hi Kiranjot,
ReplyDeleteKiranjot I like the way you described what Diwali is all about.
I learnt what Diwali means.
Next time you could say when Diwali came like what year and date and month
By Armika
Hello Kiranjot
ReplyDeletei like the way that what you have in Diwali also like food and what does Diwali means
next time you should delete the by Kiranjot and Mhoit and Aseem also Kirpal in the down part
From: Aayet
Hi Aayet,
DeleteNext time i can delete the name.
from kiranjot